Update 2019-09-04-system76.md

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 12 p.m. - 2 p.m.   
 (Those carpooling meet at the Armory parking lot at 11 a.m.)
 
-Most of the computer hardware we use was built far away, perhaps under questionable conditions. But at least one computer company, [System76](https://system76.com/), builds some of its machines here in Colorado. Its computers are open hardware and run the company's own Linux-based, open-source operating system. On this field trip, we'll take a tour of the System76 and have lunch with some employees. Lunch is provided.
+Most of the computers we use were built far away, often under questionable conditions. But at least one computer company, [System76](https://system76.com/), builds some of its machines here in Colorado. These computers are open hardware and run the company's own Linux-based, open-source operating system. On this field trip, we'll take a tour of the System76 facility and have lunch with employees.
 
 This event is open to all members of the CMCI community. [RSVP and sign up to carpool here](https://etherpad.net/p/medlab-system76).